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Essay 4 - The Circle Rough Draft

Essay 4 - The Circle Rough Draft

Q ENGL 1B ESSAY #4: The Transformation of Mae Holland ESSAY #4 TOPIC: Over the course of the novel, protagonist Mae Holland transforms from a young idealist into a pawn for The Circle. The transformation is a gradual one, but one that is absolute. While working for The Circle, Mae experiences continuous brainwashing and coaching from her superiors, and she also faces great pressure from outsiders who are watching her every move after she goes “transparent”. Mae feels a conflict between who she is inside versus who she presents herself to the world as. By the end of the novel, though, Mae succumbs to the pressure, and, for all intents and purposes, becomes a tool of The Circle. Who is most responsible for Mae’s transformation? Is it Mae’s superiors like Bailey, Stenton, Dan, Denise and Josiah, with their coercive practices? Or is it the outsiders behind screens who constantly watch, validate, and influence Mae’s actions? Or do you feel the greatest responsibility belongs to Mae herself? Choose one of the above parties and make your case. Main Task: Make an argument for who you believe is most responsible for Mae’s transformation, and as you back it with textual support, think about the significance of the transformation. Support your position with quotes from The Circle and two or more quotes from one or more of the nonfiction/secondary readings we have done as a class (“The Undercover Parent”, “Author Dave Eggers Calls for Ethical Parameters on Tech at Stanford Event”, “What Does the Panopticon Mean in the Age of Digital Surveillance?”, “How Silicon Valley Hooks Us”) Who is most responsible for the change in Mae, and what might Eggers have been trying to say through the transformation? Why do you believe he ended the book the way he did, and what might his message be for those of us who read and watch Mae’s transformation?

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The Circle is a dystopian book by American novelist Dave Eggers published in 2013. It depicts the narrative of Mae Holland, a tech worker, and how her journey begins as a pleasant encounter but rapidly turns dark, transforming her character. She is continuously trained and indoctrinated by the leaders of the company for which she is working, which transforms her from a young idealist to a mere puppet for The Circle. She seems to give in to the pressure from the onlookers who monitor her moves when she goes “transparent”, which is the epitome of her transformation. Though this process of transformation is slow, yet it is absolute. She is torn between her inner self and the person she presents herself to the outside world. Throughout the novel, Mae presents herself to people in the manner in which she wishes to be regarded.